Audience feedback

I recently uploaded my second draft onto Youtube and I received some comments of strengths and improvements on my film. I tried to get a variety of people to make comments, girls and boys however I found it difficult to get a wide range of age groups. However, my target audience is teen/young adult, so its good that I got the most feedback from this age group.

Here is some of the feedback I gained on YouTube and some comments in reply:

This is great feedback and I'm really glad they liked the flashback ideas. I think this person is confused because of the part where Casey's mum says, when are you going to tell her? However, I tried to make it as if Casey had another secret (that she is getting worse and won't recover). I might not have made this clear enough, so I might consider going back to this and editing it.

This person also liked the flashbacks which is great, they also liked the voiceover, so I'm glad that these parts are appreciated.

The improvement is useful as I didn't think about changing the animation but now I will definitely.

This person liked the range of locations which is good and the improvement is also really helpful. I still need to tweak fonts so it's good that the audience pick up on it as an improvement.

This person liked the music which is good! They also talk about the font colours, so I should look into changing this.

Here are some other comments I received: